Sunday, December 25, 2011

I Can't Distance Myself From You

I'm jealous of my love for you,
painfully and thrillingly,
The unspoken excitement
snatches me of guard,
I find myself stand like a tree
under a thunder storm,
I give in
under the power of your lightening,
I have no other choice
but love you,
Nobody recognizes your quality
the way I do,
The ideal is set for me and you,
None can help us now,
Love itself becomes an outcry
for strength,
I cannot distance myself from you,
and may never want to.

16 comments:

Brian Miller said...

like a tree under a thunderstorm...nice...nice opening line too...and sometimes love can take you just like that...

Summer said...

vivid imagery.

good luck.
Happy New Year!

JaLpArI - tHe MeRmAiD said...

i can relate to your poem really well Tifiny :) I too have a love that strikes me like lightning every second.....:)

Heaven said...

Love is still a choice.

Like these lines:

I give in
under the power of your lightening,
I have no other choice
but love you

Nice to meet you ~

booguloo said...

The last two lines brought me up quick. Nice write.

Yun Yi said...

deep passion nicely put. well done!

Marbles in My Pocket said...

A wonderful write!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/the-best-christmas-ever/

~L said...

deep! very nice write:)

Bar None Publishing Group said...

Intoxicating read! Follow your heart Tifiny, it will always serve you well.
Happy Holidays!
Mark

lynnaima said...

a push pull sorta feeling :) I so understand
happy gooseberry day!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/21/les-miettes-dun-passe/

Susie Clevenger said...

Love itself becomes an outcry
for strength,
I cannot distance myself from you,
and may never want to.

Such beautiful lines...A lovely poem

Lolamouse said...

Strongly passionate. Beautiful!

senses of soul said...

greeting from Malaysia =)

peaceroad said...

I know this kind of love, am very familiar with it. I have no favorite line because I love them all. Love is well expressed here. ~Olive Tree.

Mary said...

Strong words, strong poem!

catieeliza said...

This just made me really happy. :] I love the wild feeling your love poem has, this kind of love is a lifetime adventure. :] xx