Friday, December 16, 2011

Today, The Sky Is Full of Emotions

When a mind is fully occupied with fearful pain,
Its tears fall like spring rain,
Today, the sky is full of emotions,
Its raindrops blow like lustful wind,
Soulful explosions,
Waterfall alike expressions,
Teardrops mix with raindrops,
They constitute droplets of blessings,
I converse through the sound of the rain,
Feeling extremely refreshed and clean.

13 comments:

Brian Miller said...

i converse with the sound of rain..what a cool line...like that...nice close on this...

Mary said...

I liked thinking about the mixing of raindrops with tear drops. Sometimes rain can refresh, as it does bring new life...enables other things and thoughts to grow. Thanks for joining the 'Jam."

Margaret said...

I converse through the sound of the rain

Sometimes it brings comfort, knowing you are snuggly tucked away inside a warm house. Sometimes it offers freedom, as you lift your face to the refreshing rain.

G-Man said...

Thank you for visiting...
Perhaps you would like to join in on the Friday Funfest next week?
Let me know....Galen
Your poem was excellent

WyomingDiva said...

I have always loved the sound of rain and storms - weirdly comforting. Thanks for sharing.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I love the sky "full of emotions", and the line "I converse through the sound of the rain" very much.

Enchanted Oak said...

I enjoyed the movement from fear and pain to refreshed and clean. Not everything that frightens us is capable of defeating us. Your poem testifies to overcoming. Salute!

Stafford Ray said...

Yes, rain is teardrops and a blessing if that is how it is seen. At the extremes, there is pain and flooding but you, bless your optimism, look for the good in it all and that is your blessing.

peaceroad said...

"I converse through the sound of the rain," a beautiful line. Loved it. ~Olive Tree.

Snowflakes said...

agree with your perceptions, well done.

booguloo said...

I have to agree with Brian Miller. Nice way to close the piece.

Taylor Boomer said...

mostly agreeable statements.
have a great 2012.

abthomas said...

A very cool metaphoric piece. I enjoyed it and I like the after image it burns subtly in...