Monday, December 31, 2012

Upside Down Words

Old days sparkled in my hands
speak in anxiety,
I don't get it,
I hear the heartbeat of ancient sun ray,
The Moon's faint light
whispers from the bees,
going all over the places,
Listening to words turned
upside down,
wishes dance and sing
like flying glitter,
Dreams draw nearer,
Peace hums to the world
like humming birds,
with eyes the window
to the world.

13 comments:

pspacer11 said...

I found the link to this @ Magpie Tales. Is it supposed to be there, as I can't find anything that would link this to the prompt there.

Just curious

Brian Miller said...

I hear the heartbeat of ancient sun ray,
The Moon's faint light
whispers from the bees

nice...those are great lines...magic

adan said...

ditto brian, magic lines! ;-)

also liked, "Peace hums to the world" - fit so perfect, felt myself wanting to hum, nice!

thanks!

kittyaugust said...

This is cool.
lovely imagery, well done.

elizakeller said...

Peace hums to the world-- I liked that line, too. It certainly catches the eye!

Taylor Boomer said...

love the flow if it,

well done.

Lynn said...

very dreamy. Thank you!

rch said...

The heartbeats of ancient sun rays are a blessing to hear, upside down words even better (have you tried sideways?) Happy New Year!

Chèvrefeuille said...

Wow!!! I am speechless. I loved this piece of your poem the most:

[...] Dreams draw nearer,
Peace hums to the world
like humming birds,
with eyes the window
to the world [...]

Marbles in My Pocket said...

Wonderful write! Very nice!

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Pat-Mather Brown Gordon-ceton said...

well done.

Drew Doyle Storm Snyder Minow said...

very poetic.

Layne Gerald Wade Cutts Hansen said...

lovely.