Wednesday, January 4, 2012

Colorful Rainbow Wins


 
Colors impact one's point of view,
They converge to amaze me and you;
The girl with brown hair
seems lost under her SunBrella,
breathing gray air,
She expels her jealousy toward Cinderella,
soon she will be in Heaven,
with things made straighten,
Her followers will learn from her lesson,
C-O-L-O-R-F-U-L R-A-I-N-B-O-W wins
as angel sings.

*****

Prompt: Poetry Jam (Color Your Life)


                                         

29 comments:

Marbles in My Pocket said...

Very nice use of the prompt! I like it!

http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/01/04/cinnamon/

Brian Miller said...

interesting inclusion of cinderella in there...nice use of color....

Taylor Boomer said...

smart write.
smiles.

Dan Roberson said...

Very nice mix of colors right from an artist's palette.

Peggy said...

Lots of colors here! And I agree with Brian, the Cinderella is an interesting image!

Jeannette, said...

a colorful write...nice take on the prompt!

JANU said...

Beautiful.

Kay said...

Intriguing write.

Helen said...

Sweet, with the right touches of color!

Anonymous said...

musical and fun,

perfect story telling.

x

Laurie Kolp said...

A colorful piece.

wood said...

sunbrella... that's an interesting twist, i like that, very unexpected. a bright and hopeful poem, enjoyed very much

Mary said...

Really a colorful piece of writing! Glad you shared with Poetry Jam!

Traci B said...

A very cheerful poem, a real day brightener. :)

thingy said...

How joyful! Smiles. : )

kittyaugust said...

a delightful read...

thanks for sharing.

voiceoftruelove said...

colors are one of my favorite things in life... and they do have some effect on my mood. One of my favorite lines is "Colors impact one's point of view,
They converge to amaze me and you"

Be Well

G-Man said...

Tifiny....?
This was Outstanding!
You should plan these more often.
Very creative piece of writing
Loved your 55
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

TALON said...

Love the play of colors - both in words and in actuality.

hope said...

Nicely put!

Victoria said...

evocation of Cinderella intrigues me - I guess that's what every girl breathing gray air longs for.

marit said...

love the play on words/colors!

The Orange Tree said...

great imagery on colors.

Jinksy said...

Rainbows rule! ♥

Yvonne Osborne said...

I love the sea of unbrellas, which in itself tells a story. What a refreshing original 55. Good job!!

Doctor FTSE said...

First class use of the prompt. Well done.

kez said...

beautiful and so colourful thanks for sharing x x

Elizena said...

Very colorful. I love rich earth or jewel tones. They calm me down and help me sleep, but I think I'd like more of that yellow umbrella please. It brings light, sunshine and energy. Enjoyed reading this. Blessings!

http://elizena-lovingmycreator.blogspot.com/

~L said...

love the beat of the words!

~L