Sunday, February 15, 2015

the eye contact

desires and anxiety go under current
Bumper harvest foretold
Alkali counteracts acid
derailing is undone.
.
Transformation takes place
when green grass peeps their head
and the snow cover wet the lawn,
while the Moon holds her pillow case tight,
letting the plants go unattended.

25 comments:

humbird said...

Wow! How many shades of 'an eye contact'

Amelia Googles Sharon-Stein Wilson said...

thoughts need to be shown
to make sense, I guess.

well done!

Matt Jerry OffenSend Kivatinos Nusimow said...

haunting.

A.B. Thomas said...

Fantastic surrealism flow

Truedessa said...

Transformation when the snow melts away and green grass smiles on the land.

R.K. Garon said...

Very interesting and a wonderful read!
ZQ

Poppy said...

'Alkali counteracts acid
derailing is undone'.

Fantastically intriguing.

Wishing you a lovely week ahead.

Poppy

Matt Jerry OffenSend Kivatinos Nusimow said...

amazing imagery.

Kim Nelson said...

Your piece reads like a beautiful blend of science and art.

Donna@LivingFromHappiness said...

an interesting read.....

kaykuala said...

Most reassuring scene with advent of spring.

Hank

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I love the time of transformation, in spring and again in fall.

Madeline Terry Camille Nat Brownback said...

powerful.

Benji Barratt Clark Twohill Sullivan said...

excellent.

Cindy Gary Murray Tomblin Bullock said...

wise.

Jae Rose said...

I love the alchemy brewing gently underneath this piece

Layne Gerald Wade Cutts Hansen said...

powerful.

Sheryl David Tanya Page Raun said...

dreamy imagery.

Anne Emerson Sharp Block Bloomberg said...

woohoo.

Pat @ Mille Fiori Favoriti said...

Wonderful imagery in your poem!

Marcie Barack Lankford Ramsey Constantin said...

wow.

Iremonger Marty JacoBus Quinlan Pickens said...

nice.

catline said...

a fiction could evoke emotions too.

Amrit Sinha said...

A wonderful scenic poetry :-)

Mimi Brad Sheng Pallin Henry said...

amazing one.